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'''Here as in the other passage, the phrase is used as a means of eliciting pathos, in this case a feeling of pity for Walter who has to go into exile at such a young age. [JJTY]'''}}
 
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|{{Comment|The heavily spondaic nature of the line (5 spondees) could reflect a sense in which the two children cannot grow up soon enough--in which the time for their marriage seems like it will never come.}}
 
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|{{Parallel|''Aeineid'' 6.820: ''nova bella moventis''. . . ‘Stirring up revolt. . .’ 12.332-333.: ''sanguineus Mavors clipeo increpat atque furentis/ bella movens immittit equos''. ‘Blood-stained Mavors, stirred to fury, thunders with his shield and, rousing war, gives rein to his frenzied steeds.’
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|{{Parallel|''Aeneid'' 6.820: ''nova bella moventis''. . . ‘Stirring up revolt. . .’ 12.332-333.: ''sanguineus Mavors clipeo increpat atque furentis/ bella movens immittit equos''. ‘Blood-stained Mavors, stirred to fury, thunders with his shield and, rousing war, gives rein to his frenzied steeds.’
 
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|{{Comment|"movere": The Aquitanians seem to lack both the means and the will after Burgundians' and Franks' surrenders even to 'stir up' a war, let alone "bellum gerere".}}
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Revision as of 23:59, 14 December 2009

The Aquitainians under Alphere surrender to Attila, giving Walther as a hostage (75–92)

Postquam complevit pactum statuitque tributum, 75  SSSDDS 
Attila in occiduas promoverat agmina partes.  DDSDDS
Elision: Attila in
 
Namque Aquitanorum tunc Alphere regna tenebat,  Aquitanorum: The region of Aquitaine is in present-day south-western France.
Alphere: Apparently legendary.

 

 Aeneid 7.735: . . .Teleboum Capreas cum regna teneret. ‘. . .When he reigned over Teleboan Capreae.’

 

 
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 DSSDDS
Elision: namque Aquitanorum
 
Quem sobolem sexus narrant habuisse virilis,  DSSDDS 
Nomine Waltharium, primaevo flore nitentem.  Waltharium: The protagonist of the epic; apparently legendary.

 

 Aeineid 7.162: primaevo flore iuventus. . . ‘Youths in their early bloom. . .’ Statius, Silvae 5.1.183: vidi omni pridem te flore nitentem. ‘I have seen thee in the full splendour of they fame.’

 

 DDSSDS   Youth is equated several times in the poem with the blooming of a flower, most notably when Hagan accuses Walter of having committed an unpardonable offense by killing his nephew, whom he describes as a blooming flower [ADD LINE NOS. JZ].

Here as in the other passage, the phrase is used as a means of eliciting pathos, in this case a feeling of pity for Walter who has to go into exile at such a young age. [JJTY] 

Nam iusiurandum Heriricus et Alphere reges 80  SSDDDS
Hiatus: iusiurandum Heriricus
 
Inter se dederant, pueros quod consociarent,  Pueros quod consociarent: “that they would unite their children,” i.e., Waltharius and Hiltgunt, in marriage. Quod + subjunctive here replaces, as often, the Classical accusative + infinitive construction.

 

 SDDSDS 
Cum primum tempus nubendi venerit illis.  SSSSDS   The heavily spondaic nature of the line (5 spondees) could reflect a sense in which the two children cannot grow up soon enough--in which the time for their marriage seems like it will never come. 
Hic ubi cognovit gentes has esse domatas,  DSSSDS 
Coeperat ingenti cordis trepidare pavore,  Aeneid 6.491: ingenti trepidare metu. ‘They trembled with a mighty fear.’ 2.685: nos pavidi trepidare metu. . . ‘We, trembling with alarm. . .’ 7.458: olli somnum ingens rumpit pavor. ‘A monstrous terror broke his sleep.’ Lucan, De Bello Civili 5.530: nullo trepidare tumultu. . . ‘To thrill with no alarm. . .’

 

 DSSDDS 
Nec iam spes fuerat saevis defendier armis. 85  Aeneid 8.492-493.: ille inter caedem Rutulorum elapsus in agros/ confugere et Turni defendier hospitis armis. ‘Amid the carnage, he flees for refuge to Rutulian soil and find shelter among the weapons of Turnus his friend.’ 12.890: saevis certandum est comminus armis. ‘We must contend hand to hand with savage weapons.’

 

 SDSSDS 
'Quid cessemus', ait, 'si bella movere nequimus?  Aeneid 6.820: nova bella moventis. . . ‘Stirring up revolt. . .’ 12.332-333.: sanguineus Mavors clipeo increpat atque furentis/ bella movens immittit equos. ‘Blood-stained Mavors, stirred to fury, thunders with his shield and, rousing war, gives rein to his frenzied steeds.’

 

 SDSDDS   "movere": The Aquitanians seem to lack both the means and the will after the surrenders of the Burgundians and the Franks even to 'stir up' a war, let alone to 'wage' a war ("bellum gerere"). 
Exemplum nobis Burgundia, Francia donant.  
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 SSSDDS 
Non incusamur, si talibus aequiperamur.  SSSDDS 
Legatos mitto foedusque ferire iubebo  Aeineid 10.154: foedusque ferit. ‘He strikes a treaty.’

 

 SSSDDS 
Obsidis inque vicem dilectum porrigo natum 90  Obsidis in vicem equiv. to pro obside

 

 DDSSDS 
Et iam nunc Hunis censum persolvo futurum.'  
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 SSSSDS   The spondaic nature of the line - SSSDS - could reflect Alphere's sadness at having to hand over his son to Attila. 
Sed quid plus remorer? dictum compleverat actis.  Aeineid 2.102: quidve moror? ‘Why do I delay?’ Liber Numerorum 11.23: iam nunc videbis utrum meus sermo opere conpleatur. ‘Thou shalt presently se whether my word shall come to pass or no.’

 

 SDSSDS   The poet uses a common narratological tool to speed up the course of the story by avoiding needless repetition. 

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