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− | | | + | |{{Comment| '''1402-3''' Vogt-Spira suggest that avaritia (greed) and ira (rage) are depicted as driving forces of the epic plot and are also judged as deadly sins (Vogt-Spira 1994 p17) The collection of body parts resembles the punishment for sinners in Mark 9:42-48: "And if your hand causes you to sin, cut it off; it is better for you to enter life maimed than with two hands to go to Hell, to the unquenchable fire. And if your foot causes you to sin, cut it off; it is better for you to enter life lame than with two feet to be thrown into Hell. And if your eye causes you to sin, pluck it out; it is better for you to enter the kingdom of God with one eye than with two eyes to be thrown into Hell, where the worm does not die, and the fire is not quenched." The injuries depict the three surviving characters equally as sinners. Difficult to decide if this should be read as bucolically humorous or as an nauseous effect. BK}} |
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|[[Waltharii]] [[nec]] [[non]] [[tremulus]] [[Haganonis]] [[ocellus]]. | |[[Waltharii]] [[nec]] [[non]] [[tremulus]] [[Haganonis]] [[ocellus]]. |
Revision as of 08:44, 12 December 2009
Having wounded each other, the warriors end the battle, drink together, and engage in a friendly exchange of humorous taunt (1396–1442)
Tali negotio dirimuntur proelia facto. | Aeineid 5.467: proelia voce diremit. ‘With his voice he broke off the fight.’
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Quemque suum vulnus atque aeger anhelitus arma | Aeineid 5.432: quatit aeger anhelitus artus. ‘A painful gasping shakes his huge frame.’
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DSSDDS Elision: atque aeger False quantities: vulnus |
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Ponere persuasit. quisnam hinc immunis abiret, | DSSSDS Elision: quisnam hinc |
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Qua duo magnanimi heroes tam viribus aequi | Aeineid 6.649: magnanimi heroes. . . ‘High-souled heroes. . .’ 12.230-231.: viribus aequi/ non sumus? ‘Are we not their match in might?’
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Quam fervore animi steterant in fulmine belli? | 1400 | Aeneid 6.842: fulmina belli. . . ‘Thunderbolts of war. . .’
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Postquam finis adest, insignia quemque notabant: | Insignia equiv. to vulnera, ironic.
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Illic Guntharii regis pes, palma iacebat | SDSSDS | 1402-3 Vogt-Spira suggest that avaritia (greed) and ira (rage) are depicted as driving forces of the epic plot and are also judged as deadly sins (Vogt-Spira 1994 p17) The collection of body parts resembles the punishment for sinners in Mark 9:42-48: "And if your hand causes you to sin, cut it off; it is better for you to enter life maimed than with two hands to go to Hell, to the unquenchable fire. And if your foot causes you to sin, cut it off; it is better for you to enter life lame than with two feet to be thrown into Hell. And if your eye causes you to sin, pluck it out; it is better for you to enter the kingdom of God with one eye than with two eyes to be thrown into Hell, where the worm does not die, and the fire is not quenched." The injuries depict the three surviving characters equally as sinners. Difficult to decide if this should be read as bucolically humorous or as an nauseous effect. BK | ||||
Waltharii nec non tremulus Haganonis ocellus. | DSDDDS | |||||
Sic sic armillas partiti sunt Avarenses! |
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Consedere duo, nam tertius ille iacebat, | 1405 | Tertius: Gunther
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Aeineid 7.431: consedere duces. ‘Burn the chiefs.’
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Sanguinis undantem tergentes floribus amnem. | Aeineid 10.908: undantique. . .cruore. . . ‘In streams of blood. . .’
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Haec inter timidam revocat clamore puellam | Aeineid 4.303: vocat clamore Cithaeron. ‘Cithaeron summons her with its din.’ 2.437: vocati clamore. ‘We are called by the clamour.’
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Alpharides, veniens quae saucia quaeque ligavit. | Saucia quaeque equiv. to vulnera omnia
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His ita compositis sponsus praecepit eidem: | DDSSDS | |||||
Iam misceto merum Haganoni et porrige primum; | 1410 | SDDSDS Elision: Haganoni et Hiatus: merum Haganoni |
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Est athleta bonus, fidei si iura reservet. | Si: sc. modo
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Tum praebeto mihi, reliquis qui plus toleravi. | SDDSDS | |||||
Postremum volo Guntharius bibat, utpote segnis | SDDDDS | |||||
Inter magnanimum qui paruit arma virorum | SDSDDS | |||||
Et qui Martis opus tepide atque enerviter egit.' | 1415 | Aeneid 8.516: militiam et grave Martis opus. . . ‘Warfare and the stern work of battle. . .’
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Obsequitur cunctis Heririci filia verbis. | DSDSDS | |||||
Francus at oblato licet arens pectore vino | DSDSDS | |||||
Defer' ait 'prius Alpharidi sponso ac seniori, | DDDSDS Elision: sponso ac |
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Virgo, tuo, quoniam, fateor, me fortior ille | DDDSDS | |||||
Nec solum me, sed cunctos supereminet armis.' | 1420 | Aeineid 6.856: victorque viros spereminet omnes. ‘He towers triumphant over all.’
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Hic tandem Hagano spinosus et ipse Aquitanus, | Spinosus: cf. note on line 1351.
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Mentibus invicti, licet omni corpore lassi, | DSDSDS | |||||
Post varios pugnae strepitus ictusque tremendos | DSDSDS | |||||
Inter pocula scurrili certamine ludunt. | Georgics 2.383-384.: inter pocula laeti. . .saluere. ‘Amid their drinking they gaily danced.’
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Francus ait: iam dehinc cervos agitabis, amice, | 1425 | Georgics 3.409: agitabis onagros. ‘You will course the wild ass.’
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Quorum de corio wantis sine fine fruaris: | Wantis: “gloves,” a Germanism, cf. French gants. Fruaris equiv. to utaris
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At dextrum, moneo, tenera lanugine comple, | Eclogue 2.51: cana legam tenera lanugine mala. ‘I will gather quinces, pale with tender down.’
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Ut causae ignaros palmae sub imagine fallas. | SSSDDS Elision: causae ignaros |
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Wah! sed quid dicis, quod ritum infringere gentis | Ritum…gentis: cf. line 337.
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Liber I Macchabeorum 1.66: noluerunt infringere legem Dei sanctam. ‘They would not break the holy law of God.’ Liber Genesis 34.22: ritum gentis imitantes. . . ‘Following the manner of the nation.’
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Ac dextro femori gladium agglomerare videris | 1430 | Videris: passive
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Aeineid 2.341: lateri adglomerant nostro. ‘They gather to our side.’
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Uxorique tuae, si quando ea cura subintrat, | Aeineid 9.757: si continuo victorem ea cura subisset. . . ‘If at once the victor had taken thought. . .
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Perverso amplexu circumdabis euge sinistram? | SSSDDS Elision: perverso amplexu |
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Iam quid demoror? en posthac tibi quicquid agendum est, | SDSDDS Apheresis: agendum est |
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Laeva manus faciet.' cui Walthare talia reddit: | Aeineid 2.323: talia reddit. ‘He answers thus.’
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Cur tam prosilias, admiror, lusce Sicamber: | 1435 | Sicamber equiv. to France. The Sicambri were an ancient Germanic tribe who lived along the Rhine, connected by tradition with the Frankish royal line.
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Si venor cervos, carnem vitabis aprinam. | SSSSDS | |||||
Ex hoc iam famulis tu suspectando iubebis | Ex hoc: sc. tempore Suspectando: sc. oblique
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Heroum turbas transversa tuendo salutans. | Eclogue 3.8: transversa tuentibus hircis. . . ‘While the goats looked askance. . .’
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Sed fidei memor antiquae tibi consiliabor: | DDSDDS | |||||
Iam si quando domum venias laribusque propinques, | 1440 | SDDDDS | ||||
Effice lardatam de multra farreque pultam: | Lardatam: “fattened” Multra equiv. to lacte
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Haec pariter victum tibi conferet atque medelam. | Medelam: “medicine,” i.e., a poultice for the eye.
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