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Walther makes his camp in a mountainous area and goes to sleep (489–512)

Interea vir magnanimus de flumine pergens  Vir magnanimus: Waltharius

 

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Venerat in saltum iam tum Vosagum vocitatum. 490  Vosagum: the name properly belongs not just to a saltus but to the region of the Vosges Mountains, now in north-eastern France.

 

 
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Nam nemus est ingens, spatiosum, lustra ferarum  Georgics 2.471: illic saltus ac lustra ferarum. ‘They have woodland glades and haunts of game.’ Aeineid 3.646-647.: vitam in silvis inter deserta ferarum/ lustra domosque traho. ‘I began to drag out my life in the woods among the lonely lairs and haunts of wild beasts.’ 3.432: canibus resonantia saxa. . . ‘Rocks that echo with her hounds. . .’

 

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Plurima habens, suetum canibus resonare tubisque.  Suetum canibus resonare tubisque: i.e., a popular place for hunting.

 

 Georgics 2.471: illic saltus ac lustra ferarum. ‘They have woodland glades and haunts of game.’ Aeineid 3.646-647.: vitam in silvis inter deserta ferarum/ lustra domosque traho. ‘I began to drag out my life in the woods among the lonely lairs and haunts of wild beasts.’ 3.432: canibus resonantia saxa. . . ‘Rocks that echo with her hounds. . .’

 

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Elision: plurima habens
 
 Expound on the locus amoenus. This as an evil locus amoenus. Resonances in sources and parallels 
Sunt in secessu bini montesque propinqui,  The precise locale being described has been exhaustively sought after (cf. Althof ad loc.), but is probably imaginary; the details given are largely taken from the Aeneid and are closely tailored to the series of one-on-one combats that will occur there.

 

 Aeineid 1.159-160.: est in secessu longo locus. . .hinc atque hinc vastae rupes geminique minantur/ in caelum scopuli, quorum sub vertice late Aequora tuta silent. . .huc. . .Aeneas. . .subit. ‘There in a deep inlet lies a spot. On either side loom heavenward huge cliffs and twin peaks, beneath whose crest far and wide is the stillness of sheltered water. HereAeneas takes shelter.’ 3.229: in secessu longo. . . ‘In a deep recess. . .’ 8.597-598.: est ingens gelidum lucus prope Caeritis amnem. . .undique colles/ inclusere cavi et nigra nemus abiete cingunt. ‘Near Caere’s cold stream there stands a vast grove; on all sides curving hills enclose it and girdle the woodland with dark fir trees.’ 11.522-523.: est curvo anfractu valles. . .quam densis frondibus atrum/ urget utrimque latus. ‘There is a valley with sweeping curve, hemmed in on either side by a wall black with dense foliage.’

 

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Inter quos licet angustum specus extat amoenum,  Aeineid 1.159-160.: est in secessu longo locus. . .hinc atque hinc vastae rupes geminique minantur/ in caelum scopuli, quorum sub vertice late Aequora tuta silent. . .huc. . .Aeneas. . .subit. ‘There in a deep inlet lies a spot. On either side loom heavenward huge cliffs and twin peaks, beneath whose crest far and wide is the stillness of sheltered water. HereAeneas takes shelter.’ 3.229: in secessu longo. . . ‘In a deep recess. . .’ 8.597-598.: est ingens gelidum lucus prope Caeritis amnem. . .undique colles/ inclusere cavi et nigra nemus abiete cingunt. ‘Near Caere’s cold stream there stands a vast grove; on all sides curving hills enclose it and girdle the woodland with dark fir trees.’ 11.522-523.: est curvo anfractu valles. . .quam densis frondibus atrum/ urget utrimque latus. ‘There is a valley with sweeping curve, hemmed in on either side by a wall black with dense foliage.’

 

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Non tellure cava factum, sed vertice rupum: 495  SDSSDS 
Apta quidem statio latronibus illa cruentis.  Aeineid 11.522-523.: accommoda fraudi/ armorumque dolis. . . ‘Fit site for the stratagems and deceits of war. . .’

 

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Angulus hic virides ac vescas gesserat herbas.  Georgics 3.174-175.: non gramina tantum/ nec vescas salicum frondes. . . ‘Not grass alone or poor willow leaves. . .’ 4.131: vescumque papaver. . . ‘Fine-seeded poppy. . .’

 

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'huc', mox ut vidit iuvenis, 'huc' inquit 'eamus,  Aeineid 11.530: huc iuvenis nota fertur regione viarum. ‘Hither the warrior hastens by a well-known road.’

 

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His iuvat in castris fessum componere corpus.'  Georgics 4.438: defessa. . .componere membra. . . ‘To settle his weary limbs. . .’ 4.189: ubi iam thalamis se composuere. . . ‘When they have laid themselves to rest in their chambers. . .’

 

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Nam postquam fugiens Avarum discesserat oris, 500  Avarum…oris: i.e., Attila’s city

 

 
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Non aliter somni requiem gustaverat idem  DSDSDS 
Quam super innixus clipeo; vix clauserat orbes.  Orbes equiv. to oculos

 

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Bellica tum demum deponens pondera dixit  Bellica…pondera equiv. to arma

 

 Aeineid 10.496: rapiens immania pondera baltei. . . ‘Tearing away the belt’s huge weight. . .’

 

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Virginis in gremium fusus: 'circumspice caute,  Aeineid 8.406: coniugis infusus gremio. . . ‘Melting in his wife’s arms. . .’

 

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Hiltgunt, et nebulam si tolli videris atram, 505  Nebulam: i.e., of dust from an approaching army

 

 Aeineid 2.355-356.: lupi ceu/ raptores atra in nebula. . . ‘Like ravening wolves in a black mist. . .’ 8.258: nebulaque ingens specus aestuat atra. ‘Through the mighty cave the mist surges black.’

 

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Attactu blando me surgere commonitato,  SSSDDS 
Et licet ingentem conspexeris ire catervam,  DSSDDS 
Ne excutias somno subito, mi cara, caveto,  Hiltgunt should not wake Waltharius suddenly and thus startle him; since her eyes (acies, line 509) are good, she will be able to see an enemy from far away (and thus still give Waltharius plenty of time to react).

 

 Aeineid 2.302: excutior somno.’I shake myself from sleep.’

 

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Elision: ne excutias
 
Nam procul hinc acies potis es transmittere puras.  DDDSDS 
Instanter cunctam circa explora regionem.' 510  SSSSDS
Elision: circa explora
 
Haec ait atque oculos concluserat ipse nitentes  Aeineid 1.297: haec ait et. . . ‘He speaks these words, and. . .’ 1.228: oculos. . .nitentis. . . ‘Her bright eyes. . .’ Liber Hester 15.8: nitentibus oculis. . . ‘With shining eyes. . .’

 

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Elision: atque oculos
 
Iamque diu satis optata fruitur requiete.  Aeineid 4.619: optata luce fruatur. ‘May he enjoy the life he longs for.’

 

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